Whoo hoo!!
Thank you for putting your time into that to make all those little tweaks and changes.
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Okay Mike, .. don't kill me...
Essence boon "Stun Strike" - should there be wording that states it stacks with the monk skill, "Neck Chop" like you said it would?
Also, I noticed that neither of these skills state they must be delivered via a fist. Are you allowing us to deliver it with a weapon now, or is this an oversight? *trades in her fist physrep for a very long staff*
... and at the very, very bottom of the to do list..
On the title page of the rule book, why is there a floating period or dot between the lines "Core Rule book" and "Chivalry has not died..." way out in the left margin? This has been bothering me for some time. I hope there's a good story here. Do I win a prize for noticing it?
Also, on the title page - if we have no longer have artwork or photos, why do have artwork and photo credits?
Essence boon "Stun Strike" - should there be wording that states it stacks with the monk skill, "Neck Chop" like you said it would?
Also, I noticed that neither of these skills state they must be delivered via a fist. Are you allowing us to deliver it with a weapon now, or is this an oversight? *trades in her fist physrep for a very long staff*
... and at the very, very bottom of the to do list..
On the title page of the rule book, why is there a floating period or dot between the lines "Core Rule book" and "Chivalry has not died..." way out in the left margin? This has been bothering me for some time. I hope there's a good story here. Do I win a prize for noticing it?
Also, on the title page - if we have no longer have artwork or photos, why do have artwork and photo credits?
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ANGIE!!!!!
I JUST PRINTRD THE NEW ONE!!!!
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
I JUST PRINTRD THE NEW ONE!!!!
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Sir Kaylan Chargeender
Knight of the Order of the Crimson Aegis
Knight of the Order of the Crimson Aegis
Re: Edited Rule Book
SO MUCH LOVE!!!! <3<3<3Mage Hunter: Removed Vigor and added Punishing Blow; Removed Essence Burn and added Disenchnt (change)
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I've upset you so much, you're committing suicide by microwaving yourself?Kaylan Chargeender wrote:
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Strength of Defender moved to Advanced (that was always the intention--just missed it in the edits originally). I know that doesn't address Josh's concerns from the other post but hey, a little better at least.
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the effort is much appreciated though.
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I think it would be a bit better if Jack was listed after all the listed paths and had a bit of a more noticeable heading - it's current location, it seems a little lost in the paragraph.
Move the bit about each race being able to read/write their own language as well as common somewhere with races rather than "other racial considerations." Maybe give a very short explanation on how someone can learn other languages.
"Other Racial Considerations" - where'd the bit about the half-breeds and sub-races go? Do we no longer have half-breeds and sub-races or do you no longer need the special permission/information on how correctly role play them?
Under "Paths" Paragraphs #4 & 5 should be moved under the "Character Advancement" because I think you'd spend points as you advance your character.
(I'm really bored at work today)
Move the bit about each race being able to read/write their own language as well as common somewhere with races rather than "other racial considerations." Maybe give a very short explanation on how someone can learn other languages.
"Other Racial Considerations" - where'd the bit about the half-breeds and sub-races go? Do we no longer have half-breeds and sub-races or do you no longer need the special permission/information on how correctly role play them?
Under "Paths" Paragraphs #4 & 5 should be moved under the "Character Advancement" because I think you'd spend points as you advance your character.
(I'm really bored at work today)